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Vianne Armour's avatar

So atmospheric throughout kind of felt like I was there, helped along by a triathlon down our road today something similar to the first photo of the crowd and tent! 👌

Oli Trollgora's avatar

I'm glad you enjoyed it. I try to write so things seem real.

Vianne Armour's avatar

It really did.

Sapphra's avatar

Loved this story, Oli. The pacing really possessed me. Tension coiling, never releasing. So intoxicating.

Oli Trollgora's avatar

I try to write all of my stories like that. Some are more successful than others. Hopefully you check out more of my stories and find something else to enjoy.

Sapphra's avatar

I most certainly will.

Oli Trollgora's avatar

If you need links, just ask. The best place to start is on my page with my List of Stories.